I write both for web and print. Algorithm of Search Engines and Emotion of Human Beings seduce me equally. I dream big, dare taller.
For me Loyalty is an absolute term and limited to few people only. Hence, I use social networking sites for friendship....it saves lots of time.
Dreams are my only assets and they keep me engaged 24X7.... Hence I have the same feeling while alone or in the crowd.
Some hate me deadly, some praise me openly... it's hard to find a person who has come in contact with me and has a mixed opinion on me
really nice.i had read an poem at ravenshaw college from your diary, i have forgotten bt that was fabolous. it was regarding the grand father ,father and grand son story.can u reacall that ?
kebe kebe mu bi bhabichhi,BAPA shabda kete byapaka heipare.ama chinta ra paridhi bahare .nuhen ki??aa ta kabita nuhen aneka smruti aau swapna re guntha chhotia mala tie.jemiti gote cup ushum cha barsha rati re............
A Nice creation! especially the last work! 'se samparka ki samparka jiye kasta diena'..... Tripathy babu.. this poem tell how great is your father and how good you are ..... !
Bahut bhala heichi kavita ti... Bapan'ka prati pua ra bhavana ku barnana kariba sahaja kama nuhe. Kintu bhai tume safala heichha. Kavita ta hrudayasparshi hei paarichi.
Dear Parambramha, Yes, I checked your bolg, and read all your poems..I'm too small to say about any pros/cons of your poems. I love good poems, I mean poems which lead me, I feel that's good for me. I think I had read ATMADAHA before, (in facebook?), Bapa is very heart touching, I also loved Kathahana chadhei...dont be allured by the jargons or craftsmanship..poems flow from heart and it's crtitics' work to dissect it..Warm wishes and all the best, hiranmayee
bahut badhia heichi....kuna bhai... puni sei samparka... jau samparka kasta diena... aau bapa.. "....jie na kareni..taha vala nuhe..." ....ame karichalu... ... kintu samaya paristi ti re "se na ...hann.. hei jaye..." ...see BAPA...
its really beautyful
really nice.i had read an poem at ravenshaw college from your diary, i have forgotten bt that was fabolous. it was regarding the grand father ,father and grand son story.can u reacall that ?
kebe kebe mu bi bhabichhi,BAPA shabda kete byapaka heipare.ama chinta ra paridhi bahare .nuhen ki??aa ta kabita nuhen aneka smruti aau swapna re guntha chhotia mala tie.jemiti gote cup ushum cha barsha rati re............
A Nice creation!
especially the last work!
'se samparka ki samparka jiye kasta diena'.....
Tripathy babu.. this poem tell how great is your father and how good you are ..... !
Bahut bhala heichi kavita ti... Bapan'ka prati pua ra bhavana ku barnana kariba sahaja kama nuhe. Kintu bhai tume safala heichha. Kavita ta hrudayasparshi hei paarichi.
Pritiranjan Tripathy
SWAPNA SWAPNA HOI RAHE< JEEVANAR SAMPAN HUENA...
ahh, kebe ta sata heba swapna!
aei khusire banchiba katha.
Dhanyabad.... kie kahe odia sahitya pain samaya nahi ajira e karyabyastata bhitare
Its great...........Plz continue...
Pushpamitra/kittu
u promised a next one tuesday
kana hele kana pain update karin
any prob
but i m waiting coz u r poems are hearttouching
hrudayaku chuin la bhali kabita tie..
Some errors in my view - I may be incorrect
Kandhei instead of Kandei for the second Kandhei
jeebanara SopAna (steps) instead of SampAna
you can always refer to the digital version of the famous odi dictionaries
http://www.srujanika.org/dictionary.php?dictid=1
hats off to the Surjanika team for the commendable effort.
its mind blowing...and i need some 20-30 times more concentration to find the complete cream from it....
PT,
I saw your poem BAPA, the last 2 line of the poem is very nice. thanx.
-Amdash
HRUDAYASPARSHI
Dear Parambramha,
Yes, I checked your bolg, and read all your poems..I'm too small to say about any pros/cons of your poems. I love good poems, I mean poems which lead me, I feel that's good for me. I think I had read ATMADAHA before, (in facebook?), Bapa is very heart touching, I also loved Kathahana chadhei...dont be allured by the jargons or craftsmanship..poems flow from heart and it's crtitics' work to dissect it..Warm wishes and all the best,
hiranmayee
i love it .. gud one dear..
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very good sir you can check my blog www.soumyapoetry.blogspot.com
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bahut badhia heichi....kuna bhai...
puni sei samparka...
jau samparka kasta diena...
aau bapa..
"....jie na kareni..taha vala nuhe..."
....ame karichalu...
... kintu samaya paristi ti re "se na ...hann.. hei jaye..."
...see BAPA...
very helpful