PUNI JEEVAN PUNI DAGA

Author: Parambrahma Tripathy

BINDU TIE BI DAGA TIE
TA PAKHARE GHURU THIBA
BRUTA TI BI DAGA
SAMATALA RA PRATI TI BHAGNANSA
KHANDE CHOTA DAGA!!!

EMITI JEEVAN JYAMITI
KEBE CHOTA DAGA KEBE BADA DAGA!!!

DUKHHA NAHI KAHILE
MO DEHA RA SABU
DEKHA ADEKHA DAGA KU KALANKA
NISHKALANAKA JAHNA THARU
AHURI DUSHPRAPYA
BEDAG JEEVAN

 

4 Responses to “PUNI JEEVAN PUNI DAGA”

  1. Subrat

    Hi Kuna
    This is something great job you have accomplished for your peotry and for dying oriya literature. Enlighten us with pouring more peotry in your blog and invite other talents from orissa to join in this forum. you can use Oriya language editor too.I only remember one line from Kabibar Radhanath Roy:
    " Drust prub hoi Adrusta pratita
    Sunder panare chirantan riti
    Sunder truptira abasad nahi
    Jete dekhuthile nuadisuthai."
    Keep going and Best of writting
    Subrat Mohanty


  2. Parambrahma Tripathy

    hi subrat

    thanks for your suggestions. those are really inspiring. about more and more odia young talents, i have talked to subhranshu panda and saroj bal. we will soon start a website for it.

    the rodablock is readabilty. odia writers often blame that there is lack of target audience. in our opinion its partly true. perhaps we are not writing in such a powerful manner that can attract people.

    keep on reading my blog

    waiting for your valuable suggestions

    parambrahma

    mo odisha mo bhabishyat


  3. Anonymous

    i m wordless to this


  4. A vibrant India ~ New Visions

    We'd love English translations of Oriya poetry ~ please keep posting, and if possible, let us know when you do.

    A Vibrant India ~ New Visions

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