SMRUTI NADI

Author: Parambrahma Tripathy

ସ୍ମୃତି ନଈ
ସ୍ମୃତି ନଈ ତୀରେ ବସିଯିବୁ ଯେବେ ପଥଭାରେ ଥକିଯାଇ
ବିଷାଦକୁ ତୋର ପଣତେ ପୋଛିବ ମୋର ଅଶରୀରୀ ଛାଇ
ପଚାରିବୁନି ତୁ ସେତେବେଳେ କାହିଁ ଏତେ ଭଲପାଏ ତତେ
କି ପାଇଁ ଗାଏ ମୁଁ ଆଶା ଆଶାବରୀ ନିର୍ଜନ ମରୂପଥେ
ତୋ ଆଖିରେ ଥାଉ ଯେତେ ପ୍ରତାରଣା ପଢିଛି ତହିଁରେ ପ୍ରେମ
ତୋ ଦେହରେ ଥାଉ ଯେତେ କଳା ଦାଗ ଦେଖିଛି ଅଳସୀ ଜହ୍ନ
ଶରତ ଶିଶିର ଅଷାଢର ମାଟି ଅବା ଫଗୁଣର ଚିଠି
ସଭିଏଁ ଲାଗିବେ ମୋ ବିନା ଅଧୁରା ସତେ ଅଧାଲେଖା ଗୀତି
ଚାଲିଗଲେ ତୁହି ବାଟା ଭାଙ୍ଗିଦେଇ ସ୍ମୃତି ନଦୀରା କି ଯାଏ
ବାଟ ଭୁଲିଗଲେ ନାଉରିଆ କିବା ନଈ ବାଟ ମୋଡି ଦିଏ?

ପରଂବ୍ରହ୍ମ ତ୍ରିପାଠୀ  

 

4 Responses to “SMRUTI NADI”

  1. Unknown

    "SMRUTI NADI"
    itz an amazing creativity created by u. The ideas are really inheres from ur heart that showed an mindblowing and marvellous touch it not only exhibits ur inner felling but also gives a picture of what u really are!
    This initiation made by you is purelyn definitely worth appreciated
    but its just the beging u have to show ur real inner ability n must give real picture of ur extraorinary talents........
    my best wishes are always with u.
    may LORD JAGARNATH take u to the peak stage of ur destination.......
    ALL THE VERY BEST WISHES FOR UR BRIGHT FUTURE....
    AND U HAVE TO KEEP IT UP.......
    BEST OF LUCK


  2. Parambrahma Tripathy

    hi debasmita

    thanks for your valuable comments

    readabilty is the most talked about jargon in odia literature. if people of 18-30 age group start reading odia poetry, then there will be definitely a transformation.

    keep on reading
    waiting for your valuable comments

    parambrahma

    mo odisha mo bhabishyat


  3. Unknown

    "SMRUTI NADI"
    itz an amazing creativity created by u. The ideas are really inheres from ur heart that showed a mindblowing and marvellous touch it not only exhibits ur inner felling but also gives a picture of what u really are!
    This initiation made by you is purelyn definitely worth appreciated
    but its just the beging u have to show ur real inner ability n must give real picture of ur extraorinary talents........
    my best wishes are always with u.
    may LORD JAGARNATH take u to the peak stage of ur destination.......
    ALL THE VERY BEST WISHES FOR UR BRIGHT FUTURE....
    AND U HAVE TO KEEP IT UP.......
    BEST OF LUCK


  4. Unknown

    "SMRUTI NADI"
    itz an amazing creativity created by u. The ideas are really inheres from ur heart that showed a mindblowing and marvellous touch it not only exhibits ur inner felling but also gives a picture of what u really are!
    This initiation made by you is purelyn definitely worth appreciated
    but its just the beging u have to show ur real inner ability n must give real picture of ur extraorinary talents........
    my best wishes are always with u.
    may LORD JAGARNATH take u to the peak stage of ur destination.......
    ALL THE VERY BEST WISHES FOR UR BRIGHT FUTURE....
    AND U HAVE TO KEEP IT UP.......
    BEST OF LUCK


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