Feriba Ra' Bela

Author: Parambrahma Tripathy



Published in 20th Sept 2005, Pragativadi

 

3 Responses to “Feriba Ra' Bela”

  1. Saroj

    Jai ho...
    Likhte raho Parambrahma


  2. Parambrahma Tripathy

    Comments coming through email jatadhari sethy
    the poem feribara bela, written by you is simply heart touching and inspiring those souls who r wandering without any destination.so in my point of view,ur writing skill is definitely unparrable and challenging.so plz penning down more n more........


    Pritiranjan:

    Awesome bhai . You are going to be one of the greatest poets of our times.Bahut dhanyabad,emiti kavita padhiba ra sujog dei thibaru :)


    mahendra Dash

    babu nahin ,Khali Mahendra Dakile mun khusi hebi. :))

    just one comment -
    Correction
    Ishwara nuhen - Eeshwara

    Critiq :
    Debapaain jeebanyasa Sambalua dehe . - Doesn't make the any meaning perfect interpretation.. U can sambalua by something else - pashana or canvass etc.. just food for thought.

    u can see two of my poems
    www.mkdash.blogspot.com

    pranabesh pattanayak

    last stanza is awesome...lovely!! keep sending ur creations :) would love to read them


  3. Maheswata Mohanty

    Hei kuna ...Jibanara gote gote nichhak muhurtaku emiti sabdare prakash kariba ,dats a gr8 job..rlly wat u r doing.Your feelings r true & hrt touching...

    Bina Lakshyare kebe kebe emiti chalibaku hue samparkara anabana ajana rastare....haribare dukha nahin ki jitibare asha nahin...


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