BAPA

Author: Parambrahma Tripathy


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20 Responses to “BAPA”

  1. mamuni

    its really beautyful


  2. siddhartha

    really nice.i had read an poem at ravenshaw college from your diary, i have forgotten bt that was fabolous. it was regarding the grand father ,father and grand son story.can u reacall that ?


  3. swetapadma

    kebe kebe mu bi bhabichhi,BAPA shabda kete byapaka heipare.ama chinta ra paridhi bahare .nuhen ki??aa ta kabita nuhen aneka smruti aau swapna re guntha chhotia mala tie.jemiti gote cup ushum cha barsha rati re............


  4. Kishor

    A Nice creation!
    especially the last work!
    'se samparka ki samparka jiye kasta diena'.....
    Tripathy babu.. this poem tell how great is your father and how good you are ..... !


  5. Anonymous

    Bahut bhala heichi kavita ti... Bapan'ka prati pua ra bhavana ku barnana kariba sahaja kama nuhe. Kintu bhai tume safala heichha. Kavita ta hrudayasparshi hei paarichi.

    Pritiranjan Tripathy


  6. subhransu panda

    SWAPNA SWAPNA HOI RAHE< JEEVANAR SAMPAN HUENA...

    ahh, kebe ta sata heba swapna!
    aei khusire banchiba katha.


  7. Parambrahma Tripathy

    Dhanyabad.... kie kahe odia sahitya pain samaya nahi ajira e karyabyastata bhitare


  8. pushpamitra

    Its great...........Plz continue...

    Pushpamitra/kittu


  9. mamuni

    u promised a next one tuesday
    kana hele kana pain update karin
    any prob
    but i m waiting coz u r poems are hearttouching


  10. mkd

    hrudayaku chuin la bhali kabita tie..

    Some errors in my view - I may be incorrect
    Kandhei instead of Kandei for the second Kandhei
    jeebanara SopAna (steps) instead of SampAna


  11. mkd

    you can always refer to the digital version of the famous odi dictionaries

    http://www.srujanika.org/dictionary.php?dictid=1

    hats off to the Surjanika team for the commendable effort.


  12. shreetam

    its mind blowing...and i need some 20-30 times more concentration to find the complete cream from it....


  13. Amarendra Madhaba Dash

    PT,
    I saw your poem BAPA, the last 2 line of the poem is very nice. thanx.

    -Amdash


  14. Baijayanti

    HRUDAYASPARSHI


  15. Unknown

    Dear Parambramha,
    Yes, I checked your bolg, and read all your poems..I'm too small to say about any pros/cons of your poems. I love good poems, I mean poems which lead me, I feel that's good for me. I think I had read ATMADAHA before, (in facebook?), Bapa is very heart touching, I also loved Kathahana chadhei...dont be allured by the jargons or craftsmanship..poems flow from heart and it's crtitics' work to dissect it..Warm wishes and all the best,
    hiranmayee


  16. Dibyanshi

    i love it .. gud one dear..

    get n chek in www.eodissa.com


  17. Soumya saraswata

    very good sir you can check my blog www.soumyapoetry.blogspot.com


  18. Soumya saraswata

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  19. DEBI PRASANNA BEHERA

    bahut badhia heichi....kuna bhai...
    puni sei samparka...
    jau samparka kasta diena...
    aau bapa..
    "....jie na kareni..taha vala nuhe..."
    ....ame karichalu...
    ... kintu samaya paristi ti re "se na ...hann.. hei jaye..."
    ...see BAPA...


  20. Anonymous

    very helpful


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